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| 21 Sep 2017 | 2:37 p.m


Heli-skiing is an adventurous and dangerous activity due to the
reasonfact that the slopes, on which the people are sliding down the mountain, are not groomed, and therefore, the risk of causing avalanches is extremely high. If everybody who likesenjoys the winterWinter started heli-skiing, the rate of people gettingbeing killed in the mountains would soar dramatically. Furthermore, with the risingincreased popularity of heli-skiing, the environmental situation on the mountain would be gettingbecome worse. For instance, the frequent usage of the helicopterhelicopters would pollute the air.

Instead of heli-skiing
, I approve of doingfavor a more environmentally friendly and less risky sport likesuch as cross- country skiing, which is a combination of skiing and walking. I want to express my whole- hearted enthusiasm for this sport. YouThis sport can do this sportbe practised anywhere you like because you don't need slopesslopes are not required. One of the most impressive advantages of cross-country skiing is discovering new landscapes.

Jessica, maybe you'd like to give it a try and discover
Austria´sAustria's beautiful landscapes while cross-country skiing.

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