Hi Ola,

What a journey! It was horrible!

I woke up late, so I didn't eat breakfast. When I arrived
toat the train station, I hearheard my train will late 30 minuteswould be half an hour late. It was awful, I thought the time was getting longer and longer. When my train arrived, I was happy. I getgot on to it, but I must have been waiting 15 minutes because something was wrong. When we arrived ,I wanted to leastenlisten to music but I saw I hadn't gotdidn't have my earphones. It was horrible, because I hadn't got a book so I mustedcould only seatsit. After 2,5two and a half hours, I fell I'mfelt a little hungry. I took my sandwiches out, and I saw it was only bread,. A few minutes later I heard the train willwould be late about 4four hours late. It was like a nightmare.a real nightmare! When I arrived to city ofin my auntaunt's city, I saw my bus, so I started run,running; but when I was nextgot to the door athe bus drove and leftaway, leaving me on the bus stationstranded there, so I musthad to walk instead.

This is
allthe full story about my traveltrip, I hope you like it.

Ola

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