Dear Ms Benton,
It was a pleasure meeting you here at our headquarters last Friday. As you certainly realised, the panel was extremely interested in your innovative fitness programmes and how you would introduce those in our clubs.
Since then, we have checked your references, and all three were very positive.
Therefore, we are delighted to offer you the position of General Manager for our chain of health and fitness clubs.
We can offer a starting
profitsprofit of €40,000 a year, plus an excellent benefits package, including free accommodation and insurance.
We expect you to start work on September 1. However, we would like you to attend a two-day induction meeting at our headquarters on 3-4-August, which will help you to get to know the company and some of your future colleagues.
Please could you confirm that you wish to take up this post and also let us know whether you are able to come to New York for the induction course?
We look
welcomeforward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.

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