''I am CWO5 razor2444, and this letter is an expression of a keen interest in attending the Officer Candidate School for the July rotation. I intend to become a leader at USDF, and I know that the Officer Candidate School will undoubtedly bring this goael top manifesta this gonal. I firmly believe that I am a strong candidate due to my constant determination to demonstrate exceptional conduct, hardworking spirit and dedication towards our wonderful establishment, whilst proving that I can take on responsibility. Additionally, I aim for nothing less than perfection with my rating work. This is something that has been acknowledged due to the praise I received in the various command positions I obtained; first as the Executive Officer of Naval Operational Tests and Evaluations and now as the Commanding Officer of Strategic Plans and Policy. I continuously go beyond the call of duty and will prove my excellence if I am given the chance to be enrolled in the program.

First and foremost, the fact that I’ve joined a debating club in my school enhanced my interpersonal and communication skills, contributing to seminars and disputes in class. I was assessed on my presentation skills on a number of occasions and received feedback confirming that I am a confident presenter. Fortunately, these strengths are highly applicable to all areas of USDF, and I have used them to my advantage to take pride in my work and always give my best shot at everything, meaning I puropose to reach the top at anything I do.

Besides, I am also a very approachable person and have a friendly attitude; hence, my colleagues can be comfortable enough to seek guidance from me regarding anything that concerns them. I will then be the person that people come to for answers, instead of being the one demanding them. Even if I am engaged with in-rate obligations, I always make the time to respond promptly to all my slack and forum messages.

It is worth pointing out that in my captaincy of my school’s soccer team, not only have I learned to take the initiative to resolve situations, but I have also acquired decision-making skills, discipline, and competency. Consequently, I have the ability to tackle an obstacle from different perspectives and respond methodically in times of crisis. This enables me to think on my feet and maintain a calm demeanor when under pressure.''

Hey there! I'm currently playing a game which simulates the real-life US Military. The aforementioned text is part of my Expression of Interest for a position, and I was wondering if you could proofread it. I want it to be formal so please try to replace some words with more ''fancy'' ones. Thank you!