''To begin with, previously being a member of the Office of Foreign Affairs, has considerably honed themy skills I possess. More sSpecifically, as a Foreign Affairs Officer and mentor, I’ have learned how to produce a proper ambassador report which requires me to create a detailed account based on foreign military intelligence; something tfrom which I hatve tleaught mrned neatness and consistency.

I also took on responsibilities outside of my role requirements and happily helped others with their duties when asked - because, as a leader, it is not always about talking, but also about listening as well. I’ have had, and still have, the drive to deliver quality work even before the designated time frame which leads to me being selected as a ‘’Month Highly Achiever’’ for two timces in a row; this encouraged others to do better and better, setting a greater standard of work. Such recognition proves that I can perform well in high-pressure environments, where flexibility and initiative are essential, as I am very competitive with an ambition to succeed. Furthermore, I have also been accepted into the Manpower and Personnel Directorate and, during my training period, I have gained valuable experience with personnel management as wtogethellr aswith the use of the PTS system. Those are the characteristics that set me apart from many.

From the beginning of my tenure as the XO of Naval Operational Tests & Evaluations, I have picked up what I have needed to accomplish very quickly, making few errors. This clearly indicates my ability to learn fast and adapt to new roles. Moreover, apart from working around the clock with my CO to send out training requests and exam results, I’ have also gained invaluable leadership experience, as another important task of mine was to communicate closely with the Education Officers and oversee their workload. Mentoring a team of Education Officers is harder than it sounds, but the additional responsibility was not something that hindered me, rather it strengthened me and grew me stronger as an individual. Being a leader in this rating mhads helped me recognize that it ise importantce tof working together as a collective, and trying to encourage those who may not be as confident as others.''

Hey! I'm playing a game which simulates real-life US military. This is a part of my expression of interest in a specific position. I would really appreciate it if you could proofread it. Remember, I want it to be formal so please try to replace some words with some more ''fancy'' ones.