It's all in the past
I
waket upis yesterday morning. I wake up and I get out of bed. It is a beautiful day. The sun wais shining and the wind wais blowing. I decide that I wouilld go for a walk. I start by walking down my road. I push open my gate and close it behind me. I walk for miles and miles along a country road. I even visit my aunt. Along the way I pass a young man selling fruit. ‘How much are the apples?’ I ask. ‘£1 for a bag,’ he says. I pay the man and I continue to walk. I eat all of the apples except for one, which I drop on the ground,. tThey are delicious.

After a while I meet another man,
and this man haves a camel. The camel wais a special camel, wit have no humps. ‘What is his name?’ I ask the man. ‘His name is Humphree,’ says the man.

I walk for a very long time,
and soon the sun begins to go down. I love sunsets, and this one is beautiful, I love sunsets. I get home at about 12:30., so I isam very tired,. nNormally I go to bed at 10:00. I put on my pyjamas, rub my hands together and wentgo straight to bed. As soon as my head hits the pillow I fall asleep. That iwas the best walk of my life,. I loved it. The next day I call my mother and tell her all about it.

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