It was fFriday. I went on a trip with my friends went on a trip. We lrented a boat and liveft our city. Suddenly, a storm has broken out. I woke up when it was morning. iI looked around, and iI saw a few of my friends. They were sleepeding. I ran up to them, and I started to wake them up. I thought, "I will make a fire"." I opened my backpack, and I took out the flint wicthat I had packed the day before. When iI packed ithem on Thursday, I thought, "I hope, Wwe wouildl not have to use it to survive"." As a second tool, I took out my huntsman knife. I packed this, because I wanted to cut thime sausages. WheOnce the fire was burneding, iI took out the binoculars, and iI started tlo seeoking sfomer help. Unfortunately, I did not noticsee anything. I decided to go into the jungle to hunt for something to eat. I took the rifle and ammo and went into the woods.

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