Hi, Kate! I have to tell you something.

I just came back home from holidays. I was visiting my grandparents in their village. I
decidedecided to go for a walk with my cousin when we heard a noisy hulk. The sky turnturned black and we bacamegot scared!
We
escaped home of grandfathersfled to our grandfather's house, where we were safe. I watched out ofthrough the window how outside aas the wind and a rain are ragingraged outside. Sudenly aSuddenly, hail started being falling down and bangedbanging on the window. I was so scared, because I thought that right away the hail would smash upthe windows right away and gettingget inside, but nothing really happened.
In the end
, this storm came to an end, howeverbut losses in the city were considerable. We were lucky, that the house of grandfathersgrandfather's house hadn't suffered damage.

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