My family and I were on our yacht going to Japan across the ocean.
The ocean was called
the Great Blue ocean, and it was very beautiful and calm. As we were in the middle of the oceanit, a storm suddenly hit our yacht suddenly.
We were
severely knocked back and forth severely. Then, we saw a helicopter passing by. We were yelling for help. The helicopter did not see us and left.

Then, a big wave came and knocked us out.
OnOne crew membersmember slipped, and was hanging by on the edge of the boat. We were trying to pull him up.
To our great relief
, we saw a small island nearby. We were very excited to get to the island.
The island was uninhabited. We had to make a shelter to stay the night. We spent a few days there.
Suddenly
, one day, we saw a helicopter passing by. We quickly made fire to send smoke up to get the attention of the helicopter. Luckily the helicopter saw us and came to our rescue. We were taken to Japan safely. We thanked the pilot and the helicopter left.

The
Endend.

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