One day, I went with my friends to the Maidan Valley. onOn this trip lI had taken 2two risks.First Firstly I drove my brother's car'scar along the road, and I did not have a license.Second Secondly, Whenwhen I reached the valley it was mandatory to climb the rocks, and cross the water, and although I do not know how to swim, all this to get to the other bank, and when I arrived I discovered a wonderful place . The place deserved all of these risks.

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