I changed my clothes and got ready to go to the beach. I putbrought everything I needed.: Sunscreensunscreen, towel, and body lotion. Suddenly, my father told me that the temperature was too high. We, we must wait for a while. But, I havedid not heard oflisten to him. My little sister and I went all the way to the beach. We put the towel on the sand and then we laylaid down. Andand we put sun protection creamsunscreen on our bodies. We asked the restaurant for some cold drinks to reducecool down due to the hot atmosphere. An hour later, my little sister passed out and I was in a panic,. I couldn't do anything. I called my father and told him what happened. He came quickly and was scared for my sister. She kept asking me what happened to her. And iI couldn't answer, iI felt guilty . I felt that I was responsible for what happened to my sister. We went very quickly to the hospital. And, and the doctor said that she was hit byhad a sunstroke because of her young age and the high air temperature. It was the worst day of my life, and now I hated the hot weather, after it was. It used to be the most beautiful season of the year for me.

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