One day, my family and I decided we wanted to go float theon a river. So, we planned what river we were going to float. Weon, we packed up, and we drove to the river. At first, we thought they closed because there was a delay because ofdue to the weather. But, but they weren, 't, and we finally got to go float.

At first, my mom had to tie us together
, and we struggled to float, but then we found someone in a circle, and then we tied to each other in a big circle with the coolers in the middle not tied to each other or us.

We were floating and having fun
, but when we found more rapid water, we decided to go to down the path with the more rapid water. But weWe were suddenly headed for a tree. We, we hit the tree, and the string broke.

When the string broke
, the coolers floated away. myMy sister went and got one of them and my Peepaw got the other. They floated with the coolers while we floated to the landing dock, so we could go on the bus to go back to the car. We rode the bus back to the cars, and we went home. After that day, we promised that we would bring stronger and longer rope next time.

We decided we would float
on the river, so we did and our string broke, and we lost the coolers. Have you ever gone floating in theon a river? If you have, had yourdid the string on your tubes ever broken.break?

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