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Appearances can be deceptive. While looking through a library window yesterday, I saw a neatly groomed woman walk by. Her clothes were skillfully (1) tailored
, and her makeup was perfect. (2) Then thinking no one was looking, she crumpled a piece of paper in her hand., (3) Andand tossed it into a nearby hedge. Suddenly, she no longer (4) looks attracticeseemed attractive to me. On another occasion, I started talking to a person in my psychology class named Eric. Eric seemed to be a great person. He always got the class laughing with his (5) jokes. onOn the days when Eric was absent, I think even the professor missed his lively personality. Eric asked me (6) "if I want to get aan op in the cafeteria", and I felt happy he had (7) chosechosen me to be a friend. (8) While we were sitting in the cafeteria., Eric admitted something that really surprised me. "You think I'm so funny?" he asked. "I've been depressed for most of my life. I still see my doctor about once a month.". My jaw almost (9) dropped. I was startled. (10) EricsEric's lively personality was a product of his struggle against sadness.

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