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Where, P_aopt (t)=0.5ρπR^2 C_pmax v^3 is the optimal aerodynamic power and P_e (t) denotes electric power. Table 2 demonstrates that the proposed scheme has better electrical and aerodynamic efficiency. In other words, the presented HPM controller captures the maximum wind power and maximizemaximizes electr.....

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I have always been aware of technology and fascinated by what it can do in our daily life, up to the field of space, and I have always wanted to contribute to this sector, especially in my country, where it is considered lagging in terms of technological developments, given the weakness of the educa.....

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Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, my name is Hassnien Akeel Talib
, I am 22 and I am from Basrah, Iraq. I come from a family of 7, my mother and father did an excellent job in raising me and my four siblings. I like reading a.....

Hello profProf. I agree with your views about the research on wearable devices to link with covid-19Covid-19. I also found one paper that talks about how the wearable device can help track the health of an individual during the quarantine period and help in the early detection of covidCovid. (this(This paper is in red in.....

For: Zowie Technology company
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Hi,
I have one more year after the extension to finish my DBA. And I'm still doing my monthly meetings with my supervisor online
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I'm just wondering if I can do the rest of my studies online because
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But there are people who disagree with this idea. They believe that the Internet causes addiction in people and people spend more of their time on the Internet instead of doing useful things. And thatThat makes people obese because they spend hoursehours on the Internet without doing any physical activity. They a.....

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I have well received your answers and I understand that the change of the time limit set has a link with the global program of AYLP, so I tried to separate things and not to put a discrepancy in the program that was already planned, for. For this purpose I decided to do a project which has for object bul.....

The first bar chart illustrates the number, in millions, of weddings and separations among American people between 1970 and 2000, and the second graph compares the proportion of adults in terms of their marital conditions in the years 1970 and 2000.
It is clear that the number of marriages in the US
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